Thursday 3 June 2021

My Writing Assessment

 Today I did a piece of writing and I found this very interesting and I learn something new. My topic was about the benefits of video games and how it can have a positive and a negative and I am going to show you my piece of writing. I hope my piece of writing can convince to make your own and I hope you learn something to.



 

2 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Ngapera.
    I really liked your writing piece, I think it's awesome how you talked about why it isn't good but then you gave some positive information about it.
    Just out of curiosity, how do you feel when your playing video games?

    Your amazing Ngapera, Keep it up!

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  2. Kia Orana Ngapera. Your writing about video games is very interesting to read, and the good thing about it is that it isn't boring. What types of video games do you play, and how long do you spend playing it? I don't like playing video games, but somehow I'm actually good at some of them. Nice work, keep going.

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